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Re: Driftwood
Great imagery, etc etc...yeah, I liked it very much. Not much else to say, really. Nearly dinner time...yum, turkey! um, yeah. bye! Keep writing.
Dec 25, 2004 -
Re: Seeker of the Blade
A lot of description, which you do very well. Maybe not so great for lazy readers, but it doesn't matter, your stories wouldn't be the same without it. You take ...
Dec 24, 2004 -
Re: When Eternity isn’t Forever
Not harsh at all, I'd much rather have a construtive comment than you just saying my work was good. And I see what you mean. Thanks loads for all your ...
Dec 24, 2004 -
Re: babygirl
I liked this, loved the tone. I wasn't completely convinced about the bits in brackets. Liked the way you ended it, the last line completed the poem and summed it ...
Dec 24, 2004 -
Re: When Eternity isn’t Forever
Ta :D
Dec 24, 2004 -
Re: What's Your Mushy Song?
A Little Respect by Wheatus And Do They Know It's Christmas? makes me cry. The old one, not the new one.
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
EBM is known for being the protector of humans, small cast and other vermin. Heh, that was easy!
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: incubi (16+)
Loved it. Short but effective. I thought I'd hate it when I read the second line, but great. You're a brave writer, some people wouldn't dare write like that. It's ...
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: cyber (16+)
You created a great atmosphere. I liked it a lot. Particularly like the beginning and end few lines. Keep writing.
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: Gravity (Yes, this is me with a poem)
I liked the layout of the first stanza, you represented gravity visually, not just with words. Also, I liked the last stanza because it seemed to suggest that you're not ...
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: And He Came
I liked the atmosphere of this poem. Good work.
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: letting you go
T'was pretty good. Didn't blow me away, but I liked "Some girl to give up all that she has/or, by the time you get to her, all that she had". ...
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: Haiku: Rice Krispies
Yeah, I guess it does help you imagine the sounds. And brings back memories of eating breakfast when I was younger. Yuck, I am so sick of Rice Krispies. And ...
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: Matt
So this is the bit where I ramble on about myself and hope someone reads it, and possibly even cares. Just a tiny bit. My real name is Samantha, which ...
Dec 20, 2004 -
Re: On Catching a Falling Star
I liked it a lot. Especially the ending, reminded me of Bon Jovi's These Days.
Dec 19, 2004
